better off alone
im slitting my wrist
letting the blood pour
right down the drain
im leaving this world
I don’t care what you have to say
leave me alone and let me be
im not doing this for you
im doing it for me
I’ve had enough and im fed up
its harder than you think
to write these words to you
but I have to let you know
that it wasn’t your fault
and I love you mom
ill be better off alone
letting the blood pour
right down the drain
im leaving this world
I don’t care what you have to say
leave me alone and let me be
im not doing this for you
im doing it for me
I’ve had enough and im fed up
its harder than you think
to write these words to you
but I have to let you know
that it wasn’t your fault
and I love you mom
ill be better off alone
posted by simmons at 5:13 PM
1 Comments:
Your poems seem to have the same basic layout, they all flow the same. Me being a poet/writer myself I know how hard it is once you are in your comfort flow, but try and break it and experience a new way of writing. You will improve ten folds if you try new things.
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